O poezie... :)

#1
bunny

Posted 03 September 2008 - 21:23

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i wish to be what i'll be not
a frozen heart is all i've got
i wish to be a shinning light
so i can guide you in my night
i'm no moon, and i'm no star
i can see it from this far
that your soul is not that cold
and your heart is filled with gold.
you will search and you will find
everthing thats in my mind.
You're just a soul that i will miss
Take my life for a one last kiss
My frozen heart is melting now
I stopped wishing but i'm still dreaming how
You were mine and i was yours
How our lips were getting close...
How our dreams were ment to be
You got the key, so set me free...

Am postat-o si aici.. http://allpoetry.com/poem/4567717
Enjoy.

Edited by bunny, 03 September 2008 - 21:23.

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Edy_S

Posted 07 September 2008 - 18:35

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This frozen heart you say you feel
Is just the crust you need to peel
To find the warmth behind the cold
I'm telling this as I've been told
For I myself was scared and chained
With someone close this fear I taimed
This emptiness... I filled it up
This solitude I had to stop
And finally I got away
And so will you... on one britght day.

Poezii mai "happy" nu stii?

Edited by Edy_S, 07 September 2008 - 18:35.

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bunny

Posted 08 September 2008 - 17:52

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No, btw...nice answer written in rhymes.

GG
I've got another one.

http://allpoetry.com/poem/4578141

Edited by bunny, 08 September 2008 - 17:54.

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1test

Posted 03 December 2008 - 23:16

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Ma simt atat de departe de lumea reala
Cand trece-o saptamana si nu iti vad ochii,
Ma simt atat de departe de lumea reala
Cand trece-o saptamana si nu imi zambesti,
Ma simt atat de departe de lumea reala
Si doar vazandu-te pot sa ma apropii;
Ma simt atat de aproape de lumea reala
Cand te vad cat de frumoasa esti.

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wanna-fly

Posted 04 January 2009 - 19:05

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Imi place mult prima poezie;)) Si raspunsul lui Edy

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O poezie... :)

#1 bunny Posted 03 September 2008 - 21:23

#2 Edy_S Posted 07 September 2008 - 18:35

#3 bunny Posted 08 September 2008 - 17:52

#4 1test Posted 03 December 2008 - 23:16

#5 wanna-fly Posted 04 January 2009 - 19:05

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#1
bunny

Posted 03 September 2008 - 21:23

#2
Edy_S

Posted 07 September 2008 - 18:35

#3
bunny

Posted 08 September 2008 - 17:52

#4
1test

Posted 03 December 2008 - 23:16

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wanna-fly

Posted 04 January 2009 - 19:05